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If I jump
Will you follow
The beat of the
Drums as they get
Hollow the tree with a
Pistol in perfect range of
The one who would never
Refuse to be seen as the angels
Of earth sing and repent even in just
As a ring their thoughts are all seen and
It hurts and it kills the poor child when daddy
It all seems to obscene to the point that
They break loose in a furious roar is
Never to follow me down to the
Fork in the road when Doubt
Hovered above me in pure
Disruption and function
Of the beat as it grows
Hollow till it throws
Itself over the
…
If I jump
Will you follow?
Will you follow
The beat of the
Drums as they get
Hollow the tree with a
Pistol in perfect range of
The one who would never
Refuse to be seen as the angels
Of earth sing and repent even in just
As a ring their thoughts are all seen and
It hurts and it kills the poor child when daddy
It all seems to obscene to the point that
They break loose in a furious roar is
Never to follow me down to the
Fork in the road when Doubt
Hovered above me in pure
Disruption and function
Of the beat as it grows
Hollow till it throws
Itself over the
…
If I jump
Will you follow?
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I was just randomly experimenting on some stuff and the first two lines hit me. I let my figners do the rest... didn't even really read it till my fingers stopped typing it.
The style I used is sorta odd. Each sentence uses a trasgression into another one, with an entirely different meaning. Thusly it is called, a metephor.
I don't know why this even exsits, if you think it's just a jamble of words- you're right. It probably is.
I was going to put this into the human nature catagory... but I fear it is to abstract to be there. So it's in General Poetry. Go me.
The style I used is sorta odd. Each sentence uses a trasgression into another one, with an entirely different meaning. Thusly it is called, a metephor.
I don't know why this even exsits, if you think it's just a jamble of words- you're right. It probably is.
I was going to put this into the human nature catagory... but I fear it is to abstract to be there. So it's in General Poetry. Go me.
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...::hugs it:: I want this poem. X3 